Hey babe, it's that time of the year again,
when lilies bloom and hope is our bane..
I hum our tune just to see you swoon,
the bells chime and i'm a loopy loon...
Faces i see and yet a face i see,
do i have a case or is it another lost race to me..
A king nothing with a thorny crown,
silence is thy shadow within which i shall drown..
Why couldn't we enjoy the rain without the fear of getting wet,
must there be a reason, a rhyme and the holy set..
Can we have this one dance,
I couldn't love the music any much more....
P.S. i suppose it's nothing great or too thought provoking but it says all that I have to say and feel...
6 comments:
siiigh..wht else..?really..i see u out there in the open ..but nothin much can be done now..can it?
or so they say..
I can tell you for sure it is a lost race. This breaks the silence so no need to drown anymore. I am what I am and you are what you are, that being said, there in nothing more to really add.
Give a try
Try to give
Love someone
Let someone love you, just not me
:)
Thank you for your words of approval even if it stung just that bit.
Some races are meant to be lost and still raced in, hence the origin of the word "Hope". I guess I have a fancy for the underdog, and they don't get any bigger than this. The silence bit i'm afraid is a part of me for better or worse and it will be something within which I drown. Nothing much anybody can do about it I'm afraid.
Like you said "You are what you are and I am what I am".. Maybe it is for the con-joining of the 'right ones' to help us reach the pinnacle of what it's all meant to be, be it for a second, a minute or a lifetime...
I hope I didnt ramble on to boredom again.. :) but I guess you can put it down to sheer joy of "seeing" you... i AM flawed, i suppose.
And finally, Lovers like Beggars can't be choosers..(cheesy as that sounded) :)
Do keep visitng, nothing warms the heart more. much love.
I have seen in my short life, love attained in months and years and then lost in minutes.
I have seen mens fascination with the feat of ownership. I have seen mens desire to control, own and to destroy women.
I have seen words achieve love, and I have seen words achieve death. Yes this simple matter of expression has such power. Truly as they say, the pen is mightier then the sword.
One day relatively soon I too will have to submit my will to someone, it will be humbling. I hope to still maintain my sense of self. I have seen so many women lose this and I do not intend to be one of them.
One last thought, just as you need to fight, because you cannot choose who you love, I cannot submit just due to an overwhelmingly effort. I understand your passion, but women are highly practical.
Bravo!! Well said, and I guess this insightness, practicality and self-belief is what is so very endearing about you.
However a little inconsequential as the matter may be, it is a shame to have one's life decided by what other's have done, submitted or resigned to. But as they say, that's life (or so they say).
Sooner or later each one of us will have to submit our will to someone else, that is the unwritten law of our society. And be it man or woman, we have all done it to some extent and will do it down the line. Realistically, words are all we have; you just have to determine what is and what isn't.
One thing I'd like to point out is, things aren't supposed to be compared with others even if this (comparance)is what it is that we are so guilty of. What may have been others flaws need not be someone else's.
You have seen a lot, but there is still a lot that you haven't or refuse to see and this is as applicable to me as it is to you as it is to everyone.
I hope you find your 'unicorn' which will allow you to fly rather than bow; and I pray you will not let yourself down in any sense of manner. (which I don't think will happen; after all, I did have 3 yrs to figure that out)... :)
Don't beat yourself down too much, some of us (men) are not the greatest, but I'm sure you'll find the right one; you just have to keep your senses open.
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